Project 3: 50/50

Well done.

About Me: 45/50

Consider sections in your biography -- I inserted -- you can remove, but wanted to provide examples. Great accomplishments. Since you'v been awarded varied sums of monies for your studies, I would add together and state, " Throughout my undergraduate studies, I've been awarded $6000.00 in recognition for design excellency and the advancement of my skills and knowledge in fashion design. Keep the sentences as they are but eliminate the dollar amount IF you lump together.

Home: 50/50 - Overall presentation is balanced, professional and looks great.

 

Grading Professor: Lisa Newell